From bf198b1ef97e64ff6a2dd30ea2d9714e3b5fec73 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Stijn Buys <ingar@osirion.org>
Date: Fri, 5 Nov 2010 22:47:13 +0000
Subject: documentation updates

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 doc/guide.html | 39 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

(limited to 'doc/guide.html')

diff --git a/doc/guide.html b/doc/guide.html
index b82b068..08414e6 100644
--- a/doc/guide.html
+++ b/doc/guide.html
@@ -38,28 +38,25 @@
 	<div class="rfloater"><img src="images/main_menu.jpg" alt=""></div>
 <p>
 	When the client has started it will show you the main menu. Click the
-	<i>Start</i> button to start a local game, the <i>Internet</i>
-	button will take you to the test server. 
-</p>
-<p>
+	<i>Start</i> button to start a game, or click the <i>Internet</i>
+	button to connect to the test server. 
+</p><p>
 	The <i>Options</i> button will open the options menu where you can
-	customize your settings.
-</p>
-<p>
+	customize a number of settings.
+</p><p>
 	When the game has started it will show you the game menu. Click the
 	<i>Join</i> button to join the game, or click the <i>Disconnect</i>
 	button to leave the game and return to the main menu.
-</p>
-<p>
-	<img src="keys/f1.png" ALT=""> Later on, you can press the <b>F1</b> key to return to the main menu.
-</p>
-<p>
-	<img src="keys/tilde.png" ALT=""> You can press the <b>~</b> key at any time to open the command console.
+</p><p>
+	<img src="keys/f1.png" ALT=""> Later on, you can press <b>f1</b> to return to the main menu.
+</p><p>
+	<img src="keys/tilde.png" ALT=""> You can press <b>~</b> at any time to open the command console.
 </p><p>
 	Once you have joined, you will find yourself on Alexandria, 
 	a small trading outpost on the edge of the civilized world.
 	You begin the game as the proud owner of a small trading vessel and a modest amount of credits.
-	Click the <i>Launch</i> button to launch into space.
+</p><p>
+	<img src="icons/launch.png" ALT=""> Click the <i>Launch</i> icon on the top of the screen to launch into space.
 </p>
 </div>
 
@@ -77,9 +74,9 @@
 	Let's take a moment to look around. There are three camera views you can choose from:
 	<i>tracking view</i>, the default mode, <i>cockpit view</i> and <i>free view</i>.
 </p><p>
-	<img src="keys/v.png" ALT=""> Press the <b>V</b> key to switch to the next view.
+	<img src="keys/v.png" ALT=""> Press <b>v</b> to switch to the next view.
 </p><p>
-	<img src="keys/shift.png" ALT=""> <img src="keys/v.png" alt=""> Press <B>shift + V</b> to switch to the previous view.
+	<img src="keys/shift.png" ALT=""> <img src="keys/v.png" alt=""> Press <B>shift + v</b> to switch to the previous view.
 </p><p>
 	<img src="keys/div.png" ALT=""> Press <b>keypad /</b> to zoom in.
 </p><p>
@@ -123,9 +120,13 @@
 </p><p>
 	<img src="keys/s.png" ALT=""> Press <b>s</b> to reverse engines.
 </p><p>
-	<img src="keys/a.png" ALT=""> Press <b>a</b> to slide left.
+	<img src="keys/a.png" ALT=""> Press <b>a</b> to strafe left.
+</p><p>
+	<img src="keys/d.png" ALT=""> Press <b>d</b> to strafe right.
+</p><p>
+	<img src="keys/r.png" ALT=""> Press <b>r</b> to strafe up.
 </p><p>
-	<img src="keys/d.png" ALT=""> Press <b>d</b> to slide right.
+	<img src="keys/f.png" ALT=""> Press <b>f</b> to strafe down.
 </p><p>
 	<img src="keys/q.png" ALT=""> Press <b>q</b> to roll left.
 </p><p>
@@ -148,7 +149,7 @@
 </td></tr></table>
 <p>
 	If the camera is in tracking view or cockpit view, you can drag the mouse to
-	turn your space ship. If mouse control is disabled, click and hold the left mouse
+	turn your spaceship. If mouse control is disabled, click and hold the left mouse
 	button while you drag.
 </p><p>
 	<img src="keys/spacebar.png" alt=""> Press <b>spacebar</b> to toggle mouse control on or off.
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