From 13cc3e9bd5745d8a4a3fa47e389825f458638653 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Stijn Buys <ingar@osirion.org>
Date: Tue, 30 Oct 2012 21:40:51 +0000
Subject: Updated storyline

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 doc/storyline.html | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

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diff --git a/doc/storyline.html b/doc/storyline.html
index 6a4a46d..bcefad4 100644
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+++ b/doc/storyline.html
@@ -480,12 +480,13 @@
 </p>
 
 <h3>III. The Docking Bay</h3>
-
 <p>
-	The warm arid air of the docking bay filled the elevator. Contemporary generator technology
+	The warm, arid air of the docking bay filled the elevator. Contemporary generator technology
 	tends to ionize the atmosphere and the distinct smell of a recently landed ship was 
-	noticably present //..more//.
-</p>	
+	noticably present. Outside the elevator, the corridor leading towards the landing zone
+	stretched out, the docking bay hidden behind the left turn at the end.
+</p>
+
 	
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