From 13cc3e9bd5745d8a4a3fa47e389825f458638653 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stijn Buys Date: Tue, 30 Oct 2012 21:40:51 +0000 Subject: Updated storyline --- doc/storyline.html | 9 +++++---- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) (limited to 'doc') diff --git a/doc/storyline.html b/doc/storyline.html index 6a4a46d..bcefad4 100644 --- a/doc/storyline.html +++ b/doc/storyline.html @@ -480,12 +480,13 @@

III. The Docking Bay

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- The warm arid air of the docking bay filled the elevator. Contemporary generator technology + The warm, arid air of the docking bay filled the elevator. Contemporary generator technology tends to ionize the atmosphere and the distinct smell of a recently landed ship was - noticably present //..more//. -

+ noticably present. Outside the elevator, the corridor leading towards the landing zone + stretched out, the docking bay hidden behind the left turn at the end. +

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