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| author | Stijn Buys <ingar@osirion.org> | 2012-10-30 21:40:51 +0000 |
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| committer | Stijn Buys <ingar@osirion.org> | 2012-10-30 21:40:51 +0000 |
| commit | 13cc3e9bd5745d8a4a3fa47e389825f458638653 (patch) | |
| tree | 82c727b129cf166481e16d21ab094ad0c302e706 | |
| parent | 1dae56d7f36427042bfa6ff69ed394a715191bad (diff) | |
Updated storyline
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diff --git a/doc/storyline.html b/doc/storyline.html index 6a4a46d..bcefad4 100644 --- a/doc/storyline.html +++ b/doc/storyline.html @@ -480,12 +480,13 @@ </p> <h3>III. The Docking Bay</h3> - <p> - The warm arid air of the docking bay filled the elevator. Contemporary generator technology + The warm, arid air of the docking bay filled the elevator. Contemporary generator technology tends to ionize the atmosphere and the distinct smell of a recently landed ship was - noticably present //..more//. -</p> + noticably present. Outside the elevator, the corridor leading towards the landing zone + stretched out, the docking bay hidden behind the left turn at the end. +</p> + <!-- footer ================================================ --> |