Various minor updates to the game world documentation.

1 files changed, 30 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/developer/STORYLINE b/developer/STORYLINE
index 6559dda..bdd73a9 100644
--- a/developer/STORYLINE
+++ b/developer/STORYLINE
@@ -23,6 +23,7 @@
 	- Burton system
 		planet Burton
 		Trent outpost
+		Lindblade shipyards
 
 	- Dover system
 
@@ -32,6 +33,12 @@
 		planet Praetoria
 		planet Lovanium
 
+	HOUSE DAGON
+
+	- Dagon system
+	- Ashir-Dan system
+        - Zensunni system
+
 	COUNCIL CAPITAL (protected by the Ordinators)
 
 	The seat of the Council and the capital of the central planets.
@@ -61,12 +68,14 @@
 		starbase Helianthos (guards the border)
 		Buccaneer's Den pirate base
 
-	- Czerna Voda
-
 	- Kronenbaden
 		planet Baden
 		planet Krone
 
+	- Khorsand system
+
+	- Warsaw system
+
 	NEUTRAL SYSTEMS
 	
 	- Finnmark (Joint Miners Association headquarters)
@@ -110,7 +119,7 @@
 
 	- Alpha Kosiya
 
-	- Beta Kosiya (dissapeared and/or distroyed)
+	- Beta Kosiya (dissapeared and/or destroyed)
 
 	- Gamma Kosiya
 
@@ -129,7 +138,7 @@
 	Since the war, the term 'Borderworlds' is used to indicate
 	systems destroyed during the war, while the term 'colonies'
 	is generally used as abreviation for the 'Independent Colonies'. 
-	The Protectorate and the systems controlled by The Great Houses
+	The Protectorate and the systems controled by The Great Houses
 	are usually referred to as 'the central planets'.
 
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@@ -462,26 +471,29 @@ II. Surprises
 	armed to the teeth and ready to defend itself if it were necessary. Fortunatly,
 	it looked like the pilot had a more quiet evening in mind. In a gracious arc, 
 	he approached the station and soaring like a an eagle he started the final approached
-	to the docking bay.
-
-III. The suit
-
-	A wise man once said: "Curiosity is mankind's greatest gift. But it is
-	also mankind's greatest curse."	I didn't have to take him for his word: 
-	I've been in situations before were I wasn't supposed to belong,
-	and me intuition told me that particular ship was something I didn't want to know about.
+	to the docking bay. A pleasant sight for anyone who could appreciate the finer arts of
+	space flight.
 
 	By now it was almost 3 am and I was almost certain I was going to regret this nightwandering
 	episode when my alarm clock would obnoxiously announce the next morning. Almost, because
-	by now I had also learned that no regrets and focus on the task at hand was usually the wiser
-	course of action. Right now, the task was finding some sleep.
+	by now I had also learned that having no regrets and a strong focus on the task at hand 
+	was usually the wiser course of action. Right now, the task was finding some sleep.
 
 	I turned around, walked to the elevator at the end of the corridor and pressed the button.
-	After a few seconds the doors opened with a joyfull chime and I stepped inside. "Level 6".
+	After a few seconds the doors opened with a joyfull chime and I stepped inside. "Level 3".
 	The elevator seemed to consider my request when the doors finaly closed and it started
-	moving upward. I leaned casually against the back wall while my right hand was trying to catch
-	the yawn escaping my mouth. 
-
+	moving down. I leaned casually against the back wall while my right hand was trying to catch
+	the yawn escaping my mouth while the elevator control panel continued to count down the current
+	level in large friendly letters. "5"... "4"... almost there...  "3"... "2"...
+
+	It took a moment for reality to trickle through the veil of sleepyness, but it was quite obvious
+	the elevator had passed my level and continued its journey downwards. There was only one thing down
+	there: the docking bay, and I couldn't shed the awkward feeling it was a place I'd rather avoid 
+	at this particular moment. I pressed the emergency stop button on the control panel, to no avail.
+	
+	"1"... "0" ..."-1, Docking Bay". The low, humming noise of the elevator ended abruptly and the doors
+	opened again.
+	
 Temporary notes:
 
 	III about getting stunned in the cargo bay