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| author | Stijn Buys <ingar@osirion.org> | 2009-10-04 09:11:11 +0000 |
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| committer | Stijn Buys <ingar@osirion.org> | 2009-10-04 09:11:11 +0000 |
| commit | 0362ba4c084e8bd22f476ea6086bbc47323175bf (patch) | |
| tree | a5ed19afdb7aeb6ee362beb34dd93c4dc00d875d /doc/STORYLINE | |
| parent | fbe3ecfdcca70b782971cac24cff9c5006f9f111 (diff) | |
minor documentation updates
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diff --git a/doc/STORYLINE b/doc/STORYLINE index cdc9e3c..13c5103 100644 --- a/doc/STORYLINE +++ b/doc/STORYLINE @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ------------------------------------------------------------------ FACTIONS - Independent Colonies + Outer Colonies - Colonial Militia - Drifters @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ ------------------------------------------------------------------ PLACES - INDEPENDENT COLONIES (Colonial Militia) + OUTER COLONIES (Colonial Militia) A loose alliance of systems independent from the central planets. @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ BORDERWORLDS - - Carolian system + - Kor Glaven system planet Andros planet Corthio @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ The Year of War None of the House Lords had the motivation to order a thorough investigation into a mad man's testimony of outer world creatures. - The war came without warning. In the Caroli system, on the edge of known space + The war came without warning. In the Kor Glaven system, on the edge of known space and outside the jurisidiction of the great houses, two new colonies had been founded. The settlers were finishing the construction of their hyperspace jump gate, to connect the system to allied borderworld systems. @@ -298,7 +298,7 @@ I. Business CM-2542. It must have jumped in when I was docked at Regula. Curious. While the Ghant system was officialy under the jurisdiction of the - Independent Colonies, nobody had any real business here. Karpax was without doubt + Outer Colonies, nobody had any real business here. Karpax was without doubt a valuable commodity. With proper processing it can be used to produce alloys harder then plasteel and lighter then aluminox. Since there was no real shortage of the ore my guess was that the military's interests would lie elsewhere. For now, I decided |