storyline and documentation updates

1 files changed, 38 insertions, 26 deletions

diff --git a/doc/STORYLINE b/doc/STORYLINE
index b95602b..bd33282 100644
--- a/doc/STORYLINE
+++ b/doc/STORYLINE
@@ -12,26 +12,7 @@
 
 
   ------------------------------------------------------------------
-	FACTIONS
-
-	Outer Colonies
-
-	- Colonial Militia
-	- Drifters
-
-	Great Houses
-
-	- House Lindblade
-	- House Praetoria
-	- Council Protectorate
-
-	Tsu-Khan Empire
-
-	Pirates
-
-
-  ------------------------------------------------------------------
-	PLACES
+	FACTIONS and PLACES
 
 
 	HOUSE LINDBLADE (protected by the Lindblade military)
@@ -79,6 +60,20 @@
 		Buccaneer's Den pirate base
 		planet Antwerp?
 
+	NEUTRAL SYSTEMS
+	
+	- Finnmark (Joint Miners Association headquarters)
+		planet Finnmark
+
+	- East End
+		Ensor station
+
+	CORPORATIONS
+
+	- Micron Corporations
+	- AMTEL Tech Conglomerate
+	- Joint Miners Association
+
 	BORDERWORLDS (not claimed by any lawfull faction)
 
 	Worlds destroyed during the war.
@@ -98,11 +93,6 @@
 		Karelian nebula
 		border station
 
-	NEUTRAL WORLDS (not claimed by any lawfull faction)
-	
-	- East End
-		Ensor station
-
 	TSU-KHAN EMPIRE
 
 	- Kiana system
@@ -262,9 +252,31 @@ Project Osirion
 	was spared to gain even the slightest advantage. In less than 6 months
 	a new ship was constructed and equiped with the experimental drive unit.
 
-	This ship was called the Osirion.
+	The ship was an impressive sight: several hundred meters of neutronium-enforced
+	carbosteel, thousands of metric tonnes of superconductors and optronics,
+	a monument to human ingenuity and an instrument to survival.
+
+	This ship was christened 'Osirion'.
+
+	The ship's first test flight was a major event. Most secret projects did not
+	generate a lot of attentention, but this flight was a higly anticipated by
+	the top brass from all parties involved, military, political and corporate alike.
 
+	The ship had left the construction yard as planned and had almost arrived at
+	departure point on the edge of the star system when suddenly all communication
+	was lost. Extensive investigations after the incident have never revealed the
+	source of the malfunction, and everything that happened after this point is the
+	result of long-range sensor telemetry.
 
+	The ship arrived at the departure point and the flight continued as planned.
+	A few moments later a massive energy discharge was registered, indicating
+	that the experimental jump drive was activated. Unfortunatly, the order
+	to return to the point of departure after the initial jump, seems to be a part of
+	the plan that never got executed. The ship had literally vanished into thin air.
+
+	The top brass was very upset.
+
+	
 The Karelian Incident