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@@ -344,7 +344,9 @@ II. Surprises
III. The suit
- The design of the ship was unfamiliar. It looked like a patrol craft, armed to the teeth
+ The design of the ship was unfamiliar. It reminded me of a patrol craft, armed to the teeth
and ready to defend itself if it were necessary. Fortunatly it looked like the pilot
had a more quiet evening in mind. It made a gracious arc around the Custodian before
- heading straight to the docking clamps.
+ gliding into the docking clamps.
+
+