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-The Osirion Project - STORYLINE
+	The Osirion Project - STORYLINE
+
+  ------------------------------------------------------------------
 
 	This file contains ideas for the universe background, the factions and 
 	the storyline. It _will_ contain spoilers.
 
-FACTIONS
+
+  ------------------------------------------------------------------
+	FACTIONS
 
 	Borderworlds
 	Colonial Militia
@@ -16,7 +20,8 @@ FACTIONS
 
 	Tsu-Khan Empire
 
-PLACES
+  ------------------------------------------------------------------
+	PLACES
 
 	INDEPENDENT COLONIES (Colonial Militia)
 
@@ -75,13 +80,15 @@ PLACES
 		Kiana system
 		Kiana Prime
 
-TIMELINE
+  ------------------------------------------------------------------
+	TIMELINE
 
 	Exodus			-5000 years
 	Great War		 -300 years
 	The Karelian Incident	  -50 years
 
-HISTORY
+  ------------------------------------------------------------------
+	HISTORY
 
 	"History is poetry by those who lie, those who are mistaken, 
 	and those who do not know" - Tsu-Khan proverb
@@ -206,8 +213,8 @@ Project Osirion
 The Karelian Incident
 
 
-STORY
-
+  ------------------------------------------------------------------
+	STORY
 
 I. Chocolate milk
 
@@ -217,7 +224,7 @@ I. Chocolate milk
 	have almost criminal connections to find it. Fortunatly I had, and I did.
 	These were times for celebration. I had spend the loan I managed to get 
 	from the local planetary bank on a small transport ship and I had just 
-	finished my first day of marmitium transport from the Regula mining
+	finished my first day of karpax ore transport from the Regula mining
 	operation to Alexandria outpost. Not the glorious life I had gotten used
 	to on the central planets, but at least a decent one with its small pleasures
 	once in a while, like this cup of chocolate milk. The hundred credits I payed
@@ -238,7 +245,7 @@ I. Chocolate milk
 	to the point.
 	
 	Brent was the business type. "The rising star of the Regula mining operations,
-	overseeing all shipments of marmitium in the Ghant system", to quote his words.
+	overseeing all shipments of karpax ore in the Ghant system", to quote his words.
 	His phrases like "A smart man could make a fortune" sounded rather hollow to me,
 	but he did have a point. 500 runs to Regula to pay the loan for the ship.
 	Another 1500 more to get myself a ship big enough to hold a small cabin with all the
@@ -257,7 +264,7 @@ I. Chocolate milk
 	
 	The first two runs went smooth. Nothing unexpected. Pick up supplies at Alexandria,
 	fly all the way to the Regula mining operation station, exchange the supplies
-	for a shipment of marmitium and head back. I had just hit the impulse drive with 
+	for a shipment of karpax ore and head back. I had just hit the impulse drive with 
 	the third load in my cargo hold when I noticed something out of place.
 	
 	A blip. And a big one too. No civilian vessel had an EM radar signature that powerful.
@@ -268,20 +275,22 @@ I. Chocolate milk
 	CM-2542. It must have jumped in when I was docked at Regula.
 	
 	Curious. While the Ghant system was officialy under the jurisdiction of the 
-	Independent Colonies, nobody had any real business here. Sure marmitium was
-	a great industrial fertilizer, but my guess was that the military's interests
-	would lie elsewhere. For now, I just decided to ignore the matter. I had just made
-	a fresh start in live and I was determined not to let it get ruined by unfortunate
-	circumstances.
+	Independent Colonies, nobody had any real business here. Karpax was without doubt
+	a valuable commodity. With proper processing it can be used to produce alloys harder
+	then plasteel and lighter then aluminox. Since there was no real shortage of the ore
+	my guess was that the military's interests would lie elsewhere. For now, I decided
+	to ignore the matter. I wasn't about to meddle into military affairs and let unfortunate
+	circumstances ruin my life again.
 	
-	It was hard to ignore the massive battleship looming over the outpost, but I docked and
-	went straight to the bar. The bartender looked at me as I walked in and pointed me to
-	my regular place at the bar. "I'll be right back", he said, and disappeared into the kitchen
-	compartment. As on most quiet evenings, the regular customers were kind enough to leave
-	my seat unocupied and it didn't take the familar surroundings long to ease my exited mind
-	into a more relaxes state. "Here you are, one cup of steaming hot chocolate milk. I'm not
-	sure how or where you got it, but I am sure it is the real deal. No one would get it into
-	his mind to synthesize anything without having an actual market for it."
+	Nevertheless it was hard to ignore the massive battleship looming over the outpost,
+	but I docked and went straight to the bar. The bartender looked at me as I walked in
+	and pointed me to my regular place at the bar. "I'll be right back", he said,
+	and disappeared into the kitchen compartment. As on most quiet evenings, the 
+	regular customers were kind enough to leave my seat unocupied and it didn't 
+	take the familar surroundings long to ease my exited mind into a more relaxes state. 
+	"Here you are, one cup of steaming hot chocolate milk. I'm not sure how or where 
+	you got it, but I am sure it is the real deal. No one would get it into	his mind
+	to synthesize anything without having an actual market for it."
 	
 	As usual, my bartender was right, and that was exactly why I liked this stuff, even if it
 	costed a small fortune. "But then again", he continued and turned has eyes towards the large