zone support

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/doc/STORYLINE b/doc/STORYLINE
index 966feb6..33f532b 100644
--- a/doc/STORYLINE
+++ b/doc/STORYLINE
@@ -9,16 +9,15 @@ PLACES
 
 Borderworlds:
 
-System?
-	Planet Seymour
-	Regula mining operation
-
-	asteroid field
-
+Ghant System
 	Planet Ghant
 	Alexandria outpost
 	Battleship custodian
 
+	Planet Seymour
+	Regula mining operation
+
+	asteroid field
 
 Central worlds:
 
@@ -34,8 +33,8 @@ laughed it the mere idea, but in these outskirts of the galaxy
 chocolate was a hard to find commodity. And fresh milk? You'd have to
 have almost criminal connections to find it. fortunatly I had, and I did.
 These were times for celebration. I had spend the loan I managed to get 
-from the local planetairy bank on a small transort ship and just finished
-my first cargo shipment of <insert silly ore here> from the Regula mining
+from the local planetairy bank on a small transort ship and I had just 
+finished my first day of <insert silly ore here> transport from the Regula mining
 operation to Alexandria outpost. Not the glorious life I had gotten used
 to on the central planets, but at least a decent one with its small pleasures
 once in a while, like the cup of chocolate milk. The hundred credits I payed
@@ -56,7 +55,7 @@ We shared a few memories of distant times but it didn't take hime very long to c
 to the point.
 
 Brent was the business type. "The rising star of the Regula mining operations,
-overseeing all shipments og <fancy ore> in the Orion sector", to quote his words.
+overseeing all shipments of <fancy ore> in the Ghant system", to quote his words.
 His phrases like "A smart man could make a fortune" sounded rather hollow to me,
 but he did have a point. 500 runs to Regula to pay the loan for the ship.
 Another 1500 more to get myself a ship big enough to hold a small cabin with all the
@@ -73,7 +72,9 @@ All it misses is a pair of blasters to shoot the mosquitos from the windshield.
 
 That would have added another 50 runs to the price.
 
-
+The first two runs went smooth. Nothing unexpected. Pick up supplies at Alexandria,
+fly all the way to the Regula mining operation station, exchange the supplies
+for a shipment of <insert silly ore name here> and head back.
 
 
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