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authorStijn Buys <ingar@osirion.org>2012-10-30 21:40:51 +0000
committerStijn Buys <ingar@osirion.org>2012-10-30 21:40:51 +0000
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</p>
<h3>III. The Docking Bay</h3>
-
<p>
- The warm arid air of the docking bay filled the elevator. Contemporary generator technology
+ The warm, arid air of the docking bay filled the elevator. Contemporary generator technology
tends to ionize the atmosphere and the distinct smell of a recently landed ship was
- noticably present //..more//.
-</p>
+ noticably present. Outside the elevator, the corridor leading towards the landing zone
+ stretched out, the docking bay hidden behind the left turn at the end.
+</p>
+
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